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Post by misterpoet on Feb 3, 2007 7:13:59 GMT
.i stand, looking in the dusky room where the sun slices through shadows; it has its own clairvoyant gloom.
breaking into afternoon, the outside booms into a bright silhouette picturesque meadow… i stand, looking in the dusky room.
two different worlds loom in one place, though separated by a window - it has its own clairvoyant gloom.
( in the corner, where water leaks, grows a mushroom showing eerie from its phosphorescent glow. i stand, looking in the dusky room. )
and hours pass, when night lays his tomb, both worlds now barely show - i stand, looking in the dusky room, it has its own clairvoyant gloom.
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Post by wulfcwen on Feb 3, 2007 19:14:01 GMT
Very atmospheric I like this a lot.
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